There's no doubt that you're a good animator, but that design for that girl... just... is NOT the kind of character design that works in 3D. However, the idea behind the video reminds me of Code Lyoko, so that's a plus.
All in all 3/5. Good idea, good animation for the most part, but unfitting character design.
That uh... that wasn't funny. At all. Originally I was gonna give this a half star, as the animation was looking decent-ish. But oh boy was I wrong. Acting's obnoxious, animation's crap, audio quality is horrible, the jokes aren't even half-funny, and the idea is freakin' dumb. Shame on whoever got this featured.
That was absolutely amazing in every way. 5 stars for it all. Art, animation, sound, story. Everything. I freaking love it.
Some of the animations looked a little wonky, but the idea behind it is pretty cool, and the visual effects as well as the character designs were really awesome.
-Obviously very Egoraptor-inspired. In fact it's SO obviously Egoraptor-inspired that it feels ripoff-y.
-The jokes weren't funny. I understand the slice-of-life thing you seemed to be trying to do, but the topic wasn't funny to begin with and the execution of the jokes wasn't funny either.
-The acting is sub-par. It felt hardly rehearsed and of course the lines, having to do with the topic, weren't very good.
-The animation is extremely bland. It's way too simple. Not much is going on. Um... yeah. I'm not an expert on animation, so I don't know any fancy terminology.
-Your art style. It rules. I always enjoyed that crisp, clean style in animations such as this.
-The idea. I also enjoy that slice-of-life thingy like I mentioned.
So yeah... hope this was a fair review. 2.5/5. Right smack in the middle.
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