The bad:
-Obviously very Egoraptor-inspired. In fact it's SO obviously Egoraptor-inspired that it feels ripoff-y.
-The jokes weren't funny. I understand the slice-of-life thing you seemed to be trying to do, but the topic wasn't funny to begin with and the execution of the jokes wasn't funny either.
-The acting is sub-par. It felt hardly rehearsed and of course the lines, having to do with the topic, weren't very good.
-The animation is extremely bland. It's way too simple. Not much is going on. Um... yeah. I'm not an expert on animation, so I don't know any fancy terminology.
The good:
-Your art style. It rules. I always enjoyed that crisp, clean style in animations such as this.
-The idea. I also enjoy that slice-of-life thingy like I mentioned.
So yeah... hope this was a fair review. 2.5/5. Right smack in the middle.